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Post by heatherstar on Feb 27, 2009 19:44:33 GMT -5
Yay! It's finished! ;D
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Post by Scorchstar on Feb 27, 2009 20:48:29 GMT -5
Hmm.. I'm sorry to say, but this bio has to be rejected for now. It isn't the writing caliber we are looking for here. If you're still interested in getting the position look at one of the other leader's bios for an example. Cragstar and Scorchstar's are good examples. That and from that I'm not really sure that you are advanced enough in writing yet to lead a Clan. I'm not trying to be mean, I just need to try and a be a bit picky with the last leader position.
On a side note: Keep writing! ^^ If you do your skills will improve and maybe someday you'll have a better chance at being made leader.
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