Post by Eternity?! on Jun 13, 2009 17:11:48 GMT -5
Name:
Brokenrose
Age:
Forty two
Gender:
She-cat
Clan:
Timberclan
Rank:
Deputy?
Appearance:
Brokenrose is a beautiful black she-cat. May I begin with her undercoat? I may? Lovely. Her undercoat is pure black, like a midnight stallion running free. Next are the white areas of her coat. Her paws are like fog, white fog creeping in under her, following her pawsteps. If you go a little farther up, you'll find that her chest is also the same shade of white, a foggy color. Not, if you go even higher then that, you'll see that her face has mostly black, but there is white. Like a upside down 'T'.
Let's move on to her fur type, build, and eye color. Shall we? Well, her eyes are icy blue. I bet you're wondering, "What?? Black cats can't have blue eyes!" Well, smart one, they can. Only if they have white on their fur, like Brokenrose, here. Her build is quite muscular, and she has short fur. So it stays clean most of the time. She is an great fighter, but only a so/so hunter.
Personality:
Brokenrose has five sides to her personality: Leader like- the time to be serious, Queen like- the time to be mean, Kit like- the time to be playful, Medicine Cat like- the time to be caring, and lastly Elder like- the time to be shy, quiet, content, peaceful, and lazy. They are explained below.
Leader like
Her leader like side is what is most important when it comes to deciding who will be leader of a patrol, mentoring an apprentice, a time in battle, looking over the clan, or something huge like a major crisis (huge sickness, famine, intruders) She uses the leader like side only when she means business! Mess with her when she is in "leader mode" and you just might be picking ticks out of elder's fur. Signs to look for to know she is in leader mode are: lashing of tail, harsh tone, extreme eye contact, no smile, whiskers back, ears forward, distant gaze, and her outrageous elegant posture.
Queen like
We all know that queens are mean to their kits when they disobey? Well that is why Brokenrose has a queen like side. She almost never uses this side. She is always kind to others. The only way to get on her bad side is badmouth her, step on her tail, get into a fight with her, and even just simply bothering her when she is in "the zone". It is almost impossible to tell the difference between her leader like and her queen like side for the signs are the same.
Kit like
Brokenrose is as happy as a cat with catnip when she is in her kit like side. She normally uses this side when she is playing with the kits or apprentices. She is totally a goofball! She will trip, chase leaves, play with butterflies, catch snowflakes, jump in leaves, or even spin in circles till she falls down all just to have fun. Brokenrose is the happiest, funniest, kindest, and most unaware when in this side. If you are trying to have a conversation when she is playing, she will completely ignore you! It will be like talking to a brick wall. But remember... have fun and join in with it while you can! Because she can get pretty ugly (see queen like side).
Medicine Cat like
This is most important to Brokenrose when a cat in hurt. A caring side will come and it will be the most compassionate side you have ever seen! She will in an instant comfort and protect if you are hurt or unable to walk. She will be at your side till you are in the paws of the professional. If you had to pick one side for her to have forever, this would be the side. None would be sad, or in pain. Brokenrose would be right there in all the action.
Elder like
Basically if you had to pick a place to put all of the other personalities, this would be the place. Brokenrose's elder like side is mostly lazy. This is when early in the morning, the droopy personality will come out. Or when at night, when staring at the stars. The peacefulness won't let you escape from it's grasp. Brokenrose claims that this is her worst side, cause she hates to be like an elder. They just lay around all day, letting other cats do stuff for them! Brokenrose is a talker, and she is very sociable! She loves to be playful and energetic!
Other:
I haven't really explained her flaws, and how she reacts in situations, so here it is! When she is in a crisis situation, she normally behaves well. Though if it is REALLY bad, she will remain calm on the outside, but on the inside she will be going "Oh my god, oh my god, help, oh my god," {XD} One of her flaws, you ask? Oh, well, she does have a small temper issue. If you make her mad, you are as good as dead. She also can get quite bossy at times, and a lot of cats get annoyed by this. Other then these, she is good company. Oh! One last thing, she is rather rude to elders.
(In other words: she is bipolar. xDD)
Past:
Kit;;
Born into a litter of five, Brokenkit was named by her father, who did not want a daughter. Her brothers were named Bumblekit, Frogkit, Sirekit, and Mystkit. Milkyfur, their mother, wanted to rename Brokenkit, but the leader {favouring the father} wouldn't allow her too. Milkyfur then refused to let Darkheart come to the nursery anymore, but he liked Mystkit, and wanted to turn his heart dark, like his. Brokenkit wasn't aware of this, but it seemed everybody else was. Eventually, Mystkit was dark like his father. Bumblekit wouldn't play with Brokenkit anymore, scared that Mystkit would bully him. Knowing this, Milkyfur refused to nurse him, and took him into the forest one night. A passing rogue stole him, and she silently thanked StarClan that her other kits may be safe. Meanwhile, Darkheart learned what she had done, and was very angry. He took his anger out on Frogkit, taking his tail. Brokenkit and Bumblekit became terribly afraid of him, but Sirekit didn't care. He was a happy fella, and nothing could bring him down. Milkyfur pretended that a predator had taken him, and only Darkheart knew what had really happened.
Apprentice;;
Brokenpaw was a spunky little apprentice, and she always did as she was told. Bumblepaw, on the other hand, got in trouble often. Frogpaw and Sirepaw were like other apprentices, hating tasks, wanting to be warriors already, harhar. Brokenpaw's mentor was her own father, and he was terribly horrible to her. Being to hard of a mentor, he wouldn't let her make any mistakes. And if she did make one, he would pull her fur off. This taught her to always strive to be perfect, and Milkyfur didn't approve. Lionstar was aware of this, but he did nothing. Why? He was on his last life, and didn't want a cat to murder him. {Lazy good for nothing.. xD}
Brokenpaw came back from a hunting patrol, and learned that Frogpaw had been killed. Shocked, hurt, and scared, Brokenpaw became a shell. She couldn't believe what had happened, and why?
The day of her trial, she was terribly sad that Frogpaw couldn't be there. As she ran through the fields, she felt like she could do anything. She finished the trial with flying colors, but Sirepaw didn't. Bumblekit became a warrior with her, while Sirepaw had to train again.
Warrior;;
Named for a rose that happened to fall on her head, Brokenrose was so happy. She couldn't believe that she already had her warrior name! It seemed as if it had already been years since she got it. Her vigil went off without a hitch... until her father came out of his den. Looking for blood. He pushed Bumblestripe out of the way, and tried to kill his daughter. He was then exiled, and Milkyfur never let her out of her sight. Brokenrose was so annoyed by this, but she said nothing.
About a moon later she got her first apprentice, Hazelpaw. She pushed her hard, and Hazelpaw hated it.
--
"Can we stop? We've been out here all day long!" Hazelpaw begged, panting as well. Brokenrose just shook her head.
"No, keep going."
--
She eventually became a great warrior, and Brokenrose was so proud. Hazeltail eventually got a mate, too. This she-cat was a bit jealous, but she showed no sign of anything. Then, one day, the leader died. Redstar was now deputy, and he appointed Brokenrose as deputy for her loyalty, and determination. Her father might have been proud of her.. maybe.
Relationships:
Darkheart - Sire - {ALIVE}
Milkyfur - Queen - {ALIVE}
Bumblestripe - Brother - {ALIVE}
Mystkit - Brother - {DEAD?}
Frogpaw - Brother - {DEAD}
Siretail - Brother - {ALIVE}
{RP Example?}
'Heartless, Fadedstripe {Me} and Hauntstar.'
Fadedstripe was walking through the unknown territory. AmourClan. Why he was here, was a mysetry to even himself. He couldn't tell you why he came back, or why he fell in love with Hauntstar. The only thing he might be able to tell you was that he was insane for trying to see her again. He should've waited for a gathering, but, being the weirdo he is, he had to see her again.
He paused for a moment to check if anybody was following him. And everytime he paused, he saw her memory. A creamy-white cat, with eyes that shine like sapphire. She was more glorious then any StarClan warrior. Lost in his memories, he wouldn't know if a heartless cat came along and slaughtered him. He deduced he should get moving again, lest a heartless cat really did come. Though it was unlikly.
He took in the sights and smells of AmourClan. He wasn't sure where he was going, he was trying to find the she-cat's scent. He opened his jaws once more and inhaled. He smiled.
Ah, that's her scent. He thought proudly, and he started trotting along again, careful to stay low. If a cat found him, he would be dead.
His belly nearly touched the floor, and maybe it did, he wasn't paying attention to what his stomach did. Her scent was getting closer, and so was AmourClan's. He would have to be sneaky about getting her attention. So he did the most idiotic, stupid, and compleatly thoughtless thing he could have done. He called her name.
"Hauntstar!" Though it wasn't very loud. Just loud enough for her to hear. He could see her now from his hiding place in the bushes.
Brokenrose
Age:
Forty two
Gender:
She-cat
Clan:
Timberclan
Rank:
Deputy?
Appearance:
Brokenrose is a beautiful black she-cat. May I begin with her undercoat? I may? Lovely. Her undercoat is pure black, like a midnight stallion running free. Next are the white areas of her coat. Her paws are like fog, white fog creeping in under her, following her pawsteps. If you go a little farther up, you'll find that her chest is also the same shade of white, a foggy color. Not, if you go even higher then that, you'll see that her face has mostly black, but there is white. Like a upside down 'T'.
Let's move on to her fur type, build, and eye color. Shall we? Well, her eyes are icy blue. I bet you're wondering, "What?? Black cats can't have blue eyes!" Well, smart one, they can. Only if they have white on their fur, like Brokenrose, here. Her build is quite muscular, and she has short fur. So it stays clean most of the time. She is an great fighter, but only a so/so hunter.
Personality:
Brokenrose has five sides to her personality: Leader like- the time to be serious, Queen like- the time to be mean, Kit like- the time to be playful, Medicine Cat like- the time to be caring, and lastly Elder like- the time to be shy, quiet, content, peaceful, and lazy. They are explained below.
Leader like
Her leader like side is what is most important when it comes to deciding who will be leader of a patrol, mentoring an apprentice, a time in battle, looking over the clan, or something huge like a major crisis (huge sickness, famine, intruders) She uses the leader like side only when she means business! Mess with her when she is in "leader mode" and you just might be picking ticks out of elder's fur. Signs to look for to know she is in leader mode are: lashing of tail, harsh tone, extreme eye contact, no smile, whiskers back, ears forward, distant gaze, and her outrageous elegant posture.
Queen like
We all know that queens are mean to their kits when they disobey? Well that is why Brokenrose has a queen like side. She almost never uses this side. She is always kind to others. The only way to get on her bad side is badmouth her, step on her tail, get into a fight with her, and even just simply bothering her when she is in "the zone". It is almost impossible to tell the difference between her leader like and her queen like side for the signs are the same.
Kit like
Brokenrose is as happy as a cat with catnip when she is in her kit like side. She normally uses this side when she is playing with the kits or apprentices. She is totally a goofball! She will trip, chase leaves, play with butterflies, catch snowflakes, jump in leaves, or even spin in circles till she falls down all just to have fun. Brokenrose is the happiest, funniest, kindest, and most unaware when in this side. If you are trying to have a conversation when she is playing, she will completely ignore you! It will be like talking to a brick wall. But remember... have fun and join in with it while you can! Because she can get pretty ugly (see queen like side).
Medicine Cat like
This is most important to Brokenrose when a cat in hurt. A caring side will come and it will be the most compassionate side you have ever seen! She will in an instant comfort and protect if you are hurt or unable to walk. She will be at your side till you are in the paws of the professional. If you had to pick one side for her to have forever, this would be the side. None would be sad, or in pain. Brokenrose would be right there in all the action.
Elder like
Basically if you had to pick a place to put all of the other personalities, this would be the place. Brokenrose's elder like side is mostly lazy. This is when early in the morning, the droopy personality will come out. Or when at night, when staring at the stars. The peacefulness won't let you escape from it's grasp. Brokenrose claims that this is her worst side, cause she hates to be like an elder. They just lay around all day, letting other cats do stuff for them! Brokenrose is a talker, and she is very sociable! She loves to be playful and energetic!
Other:
I haven't really explained her flaws, and how she reacts in situations, so here it is! When she is in a crisis situation, she normally behaves well. Though if it is REALLY bad, she will remain calm on the outside, but on the inside she will be going "Oh my god, oh my god, help, oh my god," {XD} One of her flaws, you ask? Oh, well, she does have a small temper issue. If you make her mad, you are as good as dead. She also can get quite bossy at times, and a lot of cats get annoyed by this. Other then these, she is good company. Oh! One last thing, she is rather rude to elders.
(In other words: she is bipolar. xDD)
Past:
Kit;;
Born into a litter of five, Brokenkit was named by her father, who did not want a daughter. Her brothers were named Bumblekit, Frogkit, Sirekit, and Mystkit. Milkyfur, their mother, wanted to rename Brokenkit, but the leader {favouring the father} wouldn't allow her too. Milkyfur then refused to let Darkheart come to the nursery anymore, but he liked Mystkit, and wanted to turn his heart dark, like his. Brokenkit wasn't aware of this, but it seemed everybody else was. Eventually, Mystkit was dark like his father. Bumblekit wouldn't play with Brokenkit anymore, scared that Mystkit would bully him. Knowing this, Milkyfur refused to nurse him, and took him into the forest one night. A passing rogue stole him, and she silently thanked StarClan that her other kits may be safe. Meanwhile, Darkheart learned what she had done, and was very angry. He took his anger out on Frogkit, taking his tail. Brokenkit and Bumblekit became terribly afraid of him, but Sirekit didn't care. He was a happy fella, and nothing could bring him down. Milkyfur pretended that a predator had taken him, and only Darkheart knew what had really happened.
Apprentice;;
Brokenpaw was a spunky little apprentice, and she always did as she was told. Bumblepaw, on the other hand, got in trouble often. Frogpaw and Sirepaw were like other apprentices, hating tasks, wanting to be warriors already, harhar. Brokenpaw's mentor was her own father, and he was terribly horrible to her. Being to hard of a mentor, he wouldn't let her make any mistakes. And if she did make one, he would pull her fur off. This taught her to always strive to be perfect, and Milkyfur didn't approve. Lionstar was aware of this, but he did nothing. Why? He was on his last life, and didn't want a cat to murder him. {Lazy good for nothing.. xD}
Brokenpaw came back from a hunting patrol, and learned that Frogpaw had been killed. Shocked, hurt, and scared, Brokenpaw became a shell. She couldn't believe what had happened, and why?
The day of her trial, she was terribly sad that Frogpaw couldn't be there. As she ran through the fields, she felt like she could do anything. She finished the trial with flying colors, but Sirepaw didn't. Bumblekit became a warrior with her, while Sirepaw had to train again.
Warrior;;
Named for a rose that happened to fall on her head, Brokenrose was so happy. She couldn't believe that she already had her warrior name! It seemed as if it had already been years since she got it. Her vigil went off without a hitch... until her father came out of his den. Looking for blood. He pushed Bumblestripe out of the way, and tried to kill his daughter. He was then exiled, and Milkyfur never let her out of her sight. Brokenrose was so annoyed by this, but she said nothing.
About a moon later she got her first apprentice, Hazelpaw. She pushed her hard, and Hazelpaw hated it.
--
"Can we stop? We've been out here all day long!" Hazelpaw begged, panting as well. Brokenrose just shook her head.
"No, keep going."
--
She eventually became a great warrior, and Brokenrose was so proud. Hazeltail eventually got a mate, too. This she-cat was a bit jealous, but she showed no sign of anything. Then, one day, the leader died. Redstar was now deputy, and he appointed Brokenrose as deputy for her loyalty, and determination. Her father might have been proud of her.. maybe.
Relationships:
Darkheart - Sire - {ALIVE}
Milkyfur - Queen - {ALIVE}
Bumblestripe - Brother - {ALIVE}
Mystkit - Brother - {DEAD?}
Frogpaw - Brother - {DEAD}
Siretail - Brother - {ALIVE}
{RP Example?}
'Heartless, Fadedstripe {Me} and Hauntstar.'
Fadedstripe was walking through the unknown territory. AmourClan. Why he was here, was a mysetry to even himself. He couldn't tell you why he came back, or why he fell in love with Hauntstar. The only thing he might be able to tell you was that he was insane for trying to see her again. He should've waited for a gathering, but, being the weirdo he is, he had to see her again.
He paused for a moment to check if anybody was following him. And everytime he paused, he saw her memory. A creamy-white cat, with eyes that shine like sapphire. She was more glorious then any StarClan warrior. Lost in his memories, he wouldn't know if a heartless cat came along and slaughtered him. He deduced he should get moving again, lest a heartless cat really did come. Though it was unlikly.
He took in the sights and smells of AmourClan. He wasn't sure where he was going, he was trying to find the she-cat's scent. He opened his jaws once more and inhaled. He smiled.
Ah, that's her scent. He thought proudly, and he started trotting along again, careful to stay low. If a cat found him, he would be dead.
His belly nearly touched the floor, and maybe it did, he wasn't paying attention to what his stomach did. Her scent was getting closer, and so was AmourClan's. He would have to be sneaky about getting her attention. So he did the most idiotic, stupid, and compleatly thoughtless thing he could have done. He called her name.
"Hauntstar!" Though it wasn't very loud. Just loud enough for her to hear. He could see her now from his hiding place in the bushes.
