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Post by robin on Jun 4, 2009 14:46:01 GMT -5
Name: Silvershock
Age: 42 moons
Gender: Tomcat
Clan: ScarClan
Rank: Medicine cat
Appearance: ••Silvershock is a large, burly tomcat. He is very well-muscled, especially in the hindquaters and shoulders. He has massive paws with short, blunt claws perfect for hitting enemies with. Although his claws don't exactly slice open the skin, the force of his blows causes much damage.
••He has a short, smooth pelt that has many scars, though one may wonder who could damage such a strong tom. His pelt, as his name usggests, is silver. No special markings are found on Silvershock, he is just pale silver though and through.
••He has a large head with a blunt-ended muzzle and a black nose. One ear is ripped and torn, the other intact.
Personality: Here you will create the 'inner cat'. Explain everything in full detail.
Past: This is what happened in your cats past. Fully explain your cat's emotions when they went through the Right of Passage(Scar)/Path of a Warrior(Jagged)/Journey of the Soul(Peak)/Voyage of the Winding Forest(Timber). (That is, if they have reached that point) And tell me everything and anything that has happened to your cat.
Relationships: Pretty much this is where you put your cat's kin, mate, apprentice, or parents. Just any relationship your cat has that you find important enough to add.
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Post by Scorchstar on Jun 4, 2009 15:59:46 GMT -5
I understand that you're still working on this, but so far it isn't exactly what we are looking for here. For an example of a decent bio for this site, check out Tigerfrost's bio. Hope that helps, thanks for joining though!
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Post by .:{Crag}:. on Jun 11, 2009 14:28:12 GMT -5
I'm assuming you won't be coming back, so I'm going to move this to Declined bios unless you return to fix the problems. Of course you're welcome to do that! ^^
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